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Welcome
Module Overview- Pre-Assessment
- Unit 1: Investigating the California Common Core State Standards: Literacy in Science
- Unit 2: Making it Real: Classroom Examples
- A Science Lesson You’ve Taught
- Incorporating the Standards in Your Teaching
- Grade-Level Science Lessons
- Grade 1 Overview
- Learning Sequence
- Overview of Seven-day Learning Sequence
- Implementing the Standards
- CA CCSS Speaking and Listening in Science
- Productive Dialogue and Academic Language and Understanding
- Building Academic Language
- Writing in Science
- Deepening Student Understanding Through Writing
- Reading in Science
- Reading for Information
- Grade 1 Summary
- Grade 5 Overview
- Learning Sequence
- Overview of a Two-Day Learning Sequence
- CA CCSS Speaking and Listening in Science
- Productive Dialogue, Academic Language, and Understanding
- Building Academic Language
- Writing in Science
- Deepening Student Understanding Through Writing
- Reading in Science
- A Reading Text Strategy: Sticky Note Reading
- Grade 5 Summary
- Grade 8 Overview
- Learning Sequence
- Overview of the Six-Day Learning Sequence
- Implementing the Standards
- CA CCSS Speaking and Listening in Science
- Productive Dialogue Builds Students’ Academic Language and Understanding
- Building Academic Language
- Reading Complex Text in Science
- Reading for Information
- Writing in Science
- Writing Deepens Student Understanding
- Grade 8 Summary
- High School Overivew
- Learning Sequence
- Overview Video of the Five-Day Learning Sequence
- Implementing the Standards
- CA CCSS Speaking and Listening in Science
- Productive Dialogue Builds Students’ Academic Language and Understanding
- Building Academic Language
- Writing in Science
- Writing Deepens Student Understanding
- Reading in Science
- Reading the Chemistry Textbook to Prepare Cornell Notes
- High School Summary
- Unit 3: Looking at Student Work
- Quality Classroom Assessment for Science
- The Assessment/Instruction Cycle
- Grade 1: Analyzing Student Work
- Grade 5: Analyzing Student Work
- CAESL Assessment Framework: Quality Tools and Quality Use
- CAESL Assessment Framework: Quality Tools and Quality Use (continued)
- CAESL Assessment Framework: Quality Tools and Quality Use (continued)
- Analyzing Student Writing Responses Guides Instruction
- Grade 8: Analyzing Student Work
- High School: Analyzing Student Work
- Unit 4: Science Notebooks--A Tool for Student Thinking and Writing
- Unit 5: Science--A Setting for English Language Development
- Supporting English Learners
- The CA ELD Standards
- The CA ELD Standards and the CA CCSS in Practice: Grade 8
- Setting Learning Goals for English Learners in Science
- Sentence Frames and Graphic Organizers
- Pathways for English Learners’ Expression of Ideas and Academic Language
- English Learners’ Progression on the CA ELD Level Continuum
- Summary of Unit 5: What do you now know?
- “Next Steps” for Planning Science Teaching that supports English Learners
- Unit 6: Planning for Student Success
- Conceptual Flow and How People Learn
- Step 1: Pre-think Key Concepts Students should know about a Crucial Content Idea
- Step 2: Share Individual Pre-Thinking in a Team Setting
- Step 3: Compare Concepts from the Collaborative Pre-Think and Instructional Materials
- Step 4: Align Concepts from the Collaborative Pre-Think and Instructional Materials to Content Standards
- Step 5: Review the Progression of Concepts and determine the Order of Instruction that provides Strong Links for Student Learning
- Determining the Learning Sequence
- Developing a 5E Lesson Plan
- Module Summary
Post-Assessment- Certificate of Completion
Resources- Module Evaluation
CAESL Assessment Framework: Quality Tools and Quality Use (continued)
Step 5: Revise Expected Student Responses (ESRs)
Review the trends you wrote on sticky notes for each writing response set. Are there trends in the student work for each response set that would help you to identify modifications you might need to make to the current descriptors/characteristics for the high-, medium- or low-level writing responses? For example, in the medium-level response set for science understanding, students’ conclusions only addressed attraction, not the types of metals.
If so, you will want to modify the scoring guide to include these descriptors of the student work. By modifying the scoring guide, you are noting trends in student skill levels to monitor and adjust instruction.
What would you add to the teacher’s scoring guide based on your review of the student work? Add to your ideas in the descriptors/characteristics categories of the scoring guide you previously printed.
Read the chart to see how the teacher revised the ESRs in the following scoring guide. The revisions are in bold italics.
Grade 5 Scoring Guide for Formative Feedback
With Revised Expected Student Responses (ESRs)
|
Component |
High |
Medium |
Low |
|
Science Understanding |
Metals must have Fe, Co or Ni to be magnetic |
Metals must have iron Lists most items attracted |
Metals must have iron Lists only a few that were attracted |
|
Text Type Criteria (W5.1, R5.1) |
Stated claim; used evidence from experiment and reading including quote/citation; had a conclusion |
Stated claim, use 1-2 pieces of evidence; general not specific citation of text; no or weak conclusion Conclusion only about attraction not types of metals |
Stated claim, use 1-2 pieces of evidence; no or weak conclusion Incomplete |
|
Use of Academic Language |
Attract |
Use attract and stick |
Use attract and stick |
|
Communicating Information |
Links evidence—metals with Fe, Co or Ni; therefore paper clip must be one of those |
List evidence but doesn’t link it Summarizes either experiment and/or reading, but doesn’t link them |
List evidence but doesn’t link it |
Step 6: Rescore student work
Now that you have modified the ESRs, and you have seen the teacher’s modifications of the ESRs, rescore the student work. Place a sticky note on each piece of student work describing which writing response set the work falls into: high-, medium-, low-level response.
Literacy in Science. Brought to you by the California Department of Education.
For questions or feedback, please e-mail commoncoreteam@cde.ca.gov.
